Some schools put the most advanced students in separate classes from their peers so they can study more challenging materials. Do the advantages of this practice outweigh the disadvantages?

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Several schools mostly classify their high achiever students in different
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all
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • tailored curriculum
  • academic performance
  • individualized attention
  • intellectually stimulating
  • peer motivation
  • proficient classmates
  • classroom disruptions
  • varying academic needs
  • social dynamics
  • inclusiveness
  • pressure and stress
  • rigorous coursework
  • resource allocation
  • diverting attention and funding
  • mixed-ability classrooms
  • diverse perspectives
  • overall development
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