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Some schools put the most advanced students in separate classes from their peers so they can study more challenging materials. Do the advantages of this practice outweigh the disadvantages?

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Several schools mostly classify their high achiever students in different
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thus
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 they have access to learn the next level of material.
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high
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excel
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student
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class
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. The advantage by separate the students can build
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. It could produce the brilliant
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 faster. Every
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 will have top competency to achieve their goal,
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leisure
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, the atmosphere of
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class
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the class
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 the same
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mission
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, the clever
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 the same enemy capability so
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they
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cause
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mutulism
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mutualism
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learning
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, the disadvantage for low achiever
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class
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become
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standart
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standard
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, the ordinary
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 used
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surrender.
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insecurity feeling will more evolve in
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students
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,
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grouping the
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 different competence not completely the true decision. By reason
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every pupil have the same right, obligation, and treatment. In consequence,
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 in various capacity have more outweigh than apart it for some
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generous
genius
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • tailored curriculum
  • academic performance
  • individualized attention
  • intellectually stimulating
  • peer motivation
  • proficient classmates
  • classroom disruptions
  • varying academic needs
  • social dynamics
  • inclusiveness
  • pressure and stress
  • rigorous coursework
  • resource allocation
  • diverting attention and funding
  • mixed-ability classrooms
  • diverse perspectives
  • overall development
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