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The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
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A glance at the graph provided reveals the number of commodities transported with 4 different kinds of vehicle in the UK from 1974 to 2002.
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 the majority of goods were transported by roadways,
however
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 the least always belonged to pipeline roads. As it is clear,
the
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 road
transportation
 had been more popular during these decades with somewhere in the vicinity of 70
million
tones
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 in 1974 to just a low of 100
million
tones
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 in 2002.
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,
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water and rail
transportation
 had striking similarities in 1974 with 40million tonnes, in the following years,they had many differences in their trend. As we can see,water
transportation
 slightly increased to more than 60
million
tones
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,meanwhile,rail
transportation
 had some fluctuations in
this
 period.conveying some equipment by pipeline always had been less than other kinds of
transportation
.from less than 10
million
tones
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 in 1994 and
then
 had a gradually rose in 2002 with about 20
million
tones
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Transported goods
  • Quantities
  • Trends
  • Modes of transport
  • Rail
  • Road
  • Water
  • Pipeline
  • Fluctuations
  • Predominance
  • Economic influences
  • Societal changes
  • Technological advancements
  • Environmental impact
  • Growth
  • Steady increase/decrease
  • Comparison
  • Period (e.g., decade, years)
  • Examination
  • Implications
  • Analysis
  • Conclusion
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