The charts below give information about the amount of electricity used. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph outlines the typical daily demand for
electricity
in winter
and summer. All trends exhibit positive growth, albeit at different rates. Meanwhile, the lion’s share
of the pie chart was allotted to the electricity
consumption for the heating room and water in winter
, which contradicts modest
proportions of household appliances.
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the modest
electricity
consumption in winter
jumped back and forth to a shade of 5000 units
continuously and finally
stayed at 40000 units
over the first 15 hours
. After a slight lull lasted for 6 hours
afterward
, it notably accelerated a shade of 7000 Change the spelling
afterwards
units
and reached the highest point before falling back to starting point for the rest of the day. Electricity
provision in summer remained stable at a shy of 15000 units
from 0 to 21 hours
, although
there was a remarkable acceleration from 15000 units
to 20000 units
between 13 hours
to 14 hours
becoming the lion’s share
of that in summer. The positive correlation with the predominance rose a shy of 20000 units
from 21 until the end of the day.
Regarding the partitioned pie chart, the heating rooms and heating water accounted for the lion’s share
of the electricity
consumption in winter
(52.5%). Lighting, TV, radio, and vacuum cleaners, food mixers, electric tools remained a positive correlation (15%). The share
of remainders contributed 17% of the pie chart.Submitted by lpnthanh on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, winter, share, units, hours with synonyms.
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