The charts below give information about the amount of electricity used.  Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information about the amount of electricity used. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph outlines the typical daily demand for
electricity
in
winter
and summer. All trends exhibit positive growth, albeit at different rates. Meanwhile, the lion’s
share
of the pie chart was allotted to the
electricity
consumption for the heating room and water in
winter
, which contradicts
modest
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proportions of household appliances. The
electricity
consumption in
winter
jumped back and forth to a shade of 5000
units
continuously and
finally
stayed at 40000
units
over the first 15
hours
. After a slight lull lasted for 6
hours
afterward
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, it notably accelerated a shade of 7000
units
and reached the highest point before falling back to starting point for the rest of the day.
Electricity
provision in summer remained stable at a shy of 15000
units
from 0 to 21
hours
,
although
there was a remarkable acceleration from 15000
units
to 20000
units
between 13
hours
to 14
hours
becoming the lion’s
share
of that in summer. The positive correlation with the predominance rose a shy of 20000
units
from 21 until the end of the day. Regarding the partitioned pie chart, the heating rooms and heating water accounted for the lion’s
share
of the
electricity
consumption in
winter
(52.5%). Lighting, TV, radio, and vacuum cleaners, food mixers, electric tools remained a positive correlation (15%). The
share
of remainders contributed 17% of the pie chart.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Electricity consumption
  • Kilowatt-hours (kWh)
  • Energy demand
  • Power grid
  • Renewable energy sources
  • Non-renewable energy sources
  • Sustainable consumption
  • Conservation efforts
  • Industrial sector
  • Residential sector
  • Commercial sector
  • Fluctuation
  • Year-over-year comparison
  • Efficiency improvements
  • Seasonal variation
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