You recently organised al all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a loca hotel. in their feedback, participants at the meeting said they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Mrite a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter say what the participants liked about the hotel explain why they were unhappy about the food suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in the future.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
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to express my dissatisfaction with the food served for the lunch in the meeting organised by me at your hotel on 24th January. The participants liked the ambience and cleanliness of the hotel and they
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admired the service provided by the waiters.
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, they complained about the food served for the lunch. As per them, the Thai dish did not have the taste required.
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, they mentioned that a foul smell was coming from the rice and there was a lack of items for the people who ate
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.
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, I suggest you keep the dishes for which you have expertise.
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to that, prepare a fresh meal and do not serve the leftover meal and
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cook in enough quantity so it reaches everybody at the event. I hope you will consider these suggestions. Yours faithfully, Kishan
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