Smoking not only harms the smoker, but also those who are nearby. Therefore, smoking should be banned in public places. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In modern times, the issue of smoking in
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place
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has become controversial. There are those who say that smoking in public areas should be banned,
however
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others believe that it should not. In
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I will examine both sides of the argument and provide my
overall
opinion. Generally speaking, there are two main
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why
people
believe that government should forbid smoking in places,
such
as
hospital
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hospitals
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,
restaurant
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, and train
station
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. Perhaps the main reason why
people
are in front of
this
idea is
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cigarette
smoke
is carcinogenic for the
people
who breathe it. A good illustration of
this
is that
people
who
smoke
and
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smokers can develop serious
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such
as lung cancer. A
further
point in
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of banning smoking in
public
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place
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is that the
smoke
cigarette smells terrible.if you stand next to someone who is smoking, your clothes will smell like tobacco
smoke
for the rest of the day. Despite these arguments, there is
also
a case for the idea that smoking in public places should be allowed. The main reason why
people
think that
this
is a good idea is
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it could negatively affect some businesses,
such
as bars,
nightclub
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nightclubs
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and
restaurant
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restaurants
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.
As a result
, many
people
could lose
jobs
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.
Secondly
, the government could lose a lot of tax revenue from cigarettes.
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is because
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people
would buy cigarettes and so pay less tax on them. In conclusion, it must be said that smoking in public areas has become a complex issue with no easy solutions. Despite arguments to the contrary, I very strongly feel that we should ban smoking in all public places. If the government implements
this
policy, we will have a healthier and cleaner society.
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