You know that a building company is planning to build new houses in immediate proximity to your house. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter – Say how you found out about their plan – Describe how you feel about it – Explain what you hope that they do about it

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Dear Sir or Madam, I visited your construction site yesterday and found out about your plan. You are planning to develop a large housing colony and some commercial projects on the playground with a vision to provide world-class living and employment to thousands of people in the city.

Although

you have a very good vision there is one concern.

This

is the

last

playground available in the area and I find many children playing different outdoor games in the evening. I feel it would be a great loss for the kids as they will not be able to enjoy outdoor games if you built a building on the ground.

Therefore

, I hope, you may leave some part of the ground for the children to play sports or provide some facility by which they can enjoy the games. I hope you consider

this

suggestion and revise your plan

accordingly

so that children enjoy the leverage of playing in open. Yours faithfully, Kishan

Submitted by kishanpatel2550 on Sat Mar 04 2023

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