Write a letter to a financial organization that gives money to students who would like to take a part-time course. Mention - qualifications and work experience - details about the course - how this course will help you

#organization #money #students #course #qualifications #work

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

to seek financial aid for a part-time

course

. I am a student at Auckland University and doing a master of science in mathematics. Apart from that, I have experience of three years teaching college pupils. I came across the

course

offered by the university in the machine learning field. The

course

is related to my study and will be held next summer vacation. The fee for the same is 400 NZD and needs to be paid before the

course

starts. The

course

is part-time and will have practical sessions on real-life problems. The sessions will be taken by experts in the field.

This

part-time learning will help to boost my carrier in machine learning and may help me to get a good job.

Moreover

, I will be having exposure to real-life problems. I can be reached at my email [email protected] in case

further

information is required from my end. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Kishan

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