The pie chart gives information on the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets

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the

percentage

of

carbohydrates

, protein and fat included in three various

diet

programs namely average

diet

, healthy

diet

,

healthy

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diet

for sport.

Overall

, the least proportion of protein belongs to a healthy

diet

for sport,

while

the most

percentage

is in the average

diet

.

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the figure for fat has the lowest rate stored in three different

diet

programs,

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percentage

of

carbohydrates

is the highest. The proportion of

carbohydrates

in the average

diet

and

healthy

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a healthy

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diet

are 40% and 60% respectively.

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Similarly

,

carbohydrates

occupied 60% of the total ingredients consumed by sports people. The

percentage

of protein is 30% in a healthy

diet

compared to 40% in an average

diet

and 25% in a healthy

diet

of sport. The figure for fat belongs to the average

diet

and a healthy

diet

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20%

while

the

percentage

of fat accounting for a healthy

diet

for athletes is 15%.