The pie chart gives information on the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets

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the

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of

carbohydrates

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, protein and fat included in three various

diet

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programs namely average

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, healthy

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diet

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for sport.

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, the least proportion of protein belongs to a healthy

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for sport,

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the most

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is in the average

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the figure for fat has the lowest rate stored in three different

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percentage

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of

carbohydrates

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is the highest. The proportion of

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in the average

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and

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diet

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are 40% and 60% respectively.

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Similarly

,

carbohydrates

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occupied 60% of the total ingredients consumed by sports people. The

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of protein is 30% in a healthy

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compared to 40% in an average

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and 25% in a healthy

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of sport. The figure for fat belongs to the average

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and a healthy

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the same

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20%

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the

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of fat accounting for a healthy

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for athletes is 15%.