Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and poluttion problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures fdo you think might be effective?

It is said that lifting the petrol price may be the most effective way of avoiding air pollution.
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, I think it is not the only solution
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, there are lots more roots of
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of what they are doing today. Recycling and reusing, using public transport more, planting trees, and avoiding non-ecologically friendly products should be taken into consideration by
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. For these , meetings and propaganda ought to be paid more attention
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encouraged by governmental agencies. These days numerous men in China participate in volunteering acts related to the help of natural surroundings. In conclusion, even though maximizing the car's liquid may tackle the issue to some extent, educating the public may be a vital point.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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