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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #university #students #study #subjects #future #science #technology
Many people argue about the possibility to choose the
subjects
 in university by
students
. Some people consider that
students
 should have freedom in
this
 case,
others
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 prefer to entrust
this
 right to professionals. In my point of
view
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 the student should choose the minor part of
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the
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subjects
 their
education
 consists
, the
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of, the
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 rest part of the program needs to be compiled by methodists. Following new trends more and more universities let
students
 themselves
to
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apply
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collect their educational programs by subject. There are some problems with
this
 approach – not all
students
highly
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are highly
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 motivated to study
the
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complicated
subjects
 and could choose more light ones to study.
Moreover
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 not all
students
 can understand the coherence of studying where the knowledge must be get in the right order.
For example
, to get quality
education
 in
the
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a
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 particular sphere of exact science, like astronomy, a student needs to have enough knowledge in math, physics, etc. From my
perspective
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 it is possible to form
of
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apply
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their own university program, but mostly in the initial stage of
the
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education
 and mostly with professions, not related to an exact science. It could help them to keep their interest
in to
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process
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the process
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. But at some point in
education
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 a quantity of choosing
subjects
 need to be almost all excluded. Even
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though
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so
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 some
students
 want to learn additional programs, it must not influence
to
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general
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the general
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course
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courses
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 and they can study
its
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it
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 like facultative. In my view the
students
 could
to
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be included in forming programs on the first step,
further
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 it needs to be done by specialists. In
short
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this
 method allows to safe the interests of
students
 and does not let to produce gaps in knowledge. I hope a lot of countries will follow
this
 approach in the future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • foster
  • engagement
  • excel
  • innovative contributions
  • diversity in research
  • well-rounded education
  • broad perspectives
  • critical thinking skills
  • mental well-being
  • burnout
  • forced academic paths
  • job-ready
  • skills shortages
  • tech-driven economy
  • employment rates
  • changing job market
  • utilitarian subjects
  • aptitudes
  • wasting talent
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