You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A good friend has just changed schools and is having difficulty fitting in and needs your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • make suggestions as to how they could make friends • suggest joining clubs, participating in school activities • give any extra general advice You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear..., You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Riddhi, I hope

this

letter finds you well. I received your letter stating that you are having difficulty fitting into the new school. I would suggest making some new friends and going with them for lunch and games, they will help you and you will not feel alone.

Additionally

, as per my knowledge, there are multiple clubs and you may join any one of the clubs of your interest for some extra activities. You may

also

start participating in extracurricular activities, which may help you to deviate from your thoughts and you will start liking them there. I would suggest joining the cricket team as you are a good player and you will meet kids with similar interests.

Additionally

, I would suggest focusing on your study as your exam is much near and I want to get you a good score. I hope to hear from you soon. Yours lovingly, Kishan

Submitted by kishanpatel2550 on Sun Mar 05 2023

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

152 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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