You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A good friend has just changed schools and is having difficulty fitting in and needs your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • make suggestions as to how they could make friends • suggest joining clubs, participating in school activities • give any extra general advice You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear..., You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Riddhi, I hope
this
letter finds you well. I received your letter stating that you are having difficulty fitting into the new school. I would suggest making some new friends and going with them for lunch and games, they will help you and you will not feel alone.
Additionally
, as per my knowledge, there are multiple clubs and you may join any one of the clubs of your interest for some extra activities. You may
also
start participating in extracurricular activities, which may help you to deviate from your thoughts and you will start liking them there. I would suggest joining the cricket team as you are a good player and you will meet kids with similar interests.
Additionally
, I would suggest focusing on your study as your exam is much near and I want to get you a good score. I hope to hear from you soon. Yours lovingly, Kishan
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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