In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of problems and what measures could be taken to solve them

These days,one of the most controversial issues around the world is obesity and
overweight
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in some
speciefic
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specific
countries.
Besides
,lack of the healthy activities is
other
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reason that some nations are
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about.In
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I will explain about reasons behind the issue and I will give some possible solutions. It is well-established fact that,
although
,
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fresh
food
and homemade
food
have
greater
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health
benefit
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,many
people
would rather eat fast
food
or junk
food
.The reason is that
people
have no enough time to prepare healthy and organic
food
.
In addition
,most
people
work in
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building
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and they sit on
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chair for more than 8 hours
with out
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any movement.Another
further
reason that should be mentioned is that
,
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some
people
have no access to fitness
club
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clubs
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because some of them are far from their
home
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or workplace.All in
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can be
cause
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the cause
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of obesity and poor diet that lead to
unhealthy
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an unhealthy
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lifestyle. There are many measures that can be taken in order to solve
this
problem.first of all
governments
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duties in
this
vital
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,
however
,should not be taken lightly.They should increase
people
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awarness
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awareness
about the healthy lifestyle and consequences of being overweight with produce some appropriate
program
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not only on the tv but
also
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social media.They should
also
provide
sport
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facilities in
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part
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of the city for free to encourage
people
to use
sport
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facilties
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facilities
to be more healthy and fit.
To sum up
,prevention is always better than cure.And government and
people
should take
an
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even small steps to
imrove
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improve
this
condition and just with the cooperation of both we can gain the desired result.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sedentary
  • obesity
  • overweight
  • physical activity
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • exercise
  • unhealthy diet
  • fast food
  • urbanization
  • modernization
  • stress
  • awareness
  • education
  • government intervention
  • policies
  • promotion
  • sports
  • fitness programs
  • health education
  • taxation
  • public transportation
  • infrastructure
  • parks
  • recreational spaces
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