The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (Co2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007
The line graph depicts the CO2 emission in several countries which were surveyed in metric tonnes from 1967 to 2007 decennially.
Overall
, all of the numbers indicate positive trends, whereas
only cases in the United Kingdom and Sweden dropped continuously.
In detail, in 1967, the emission of CO2 in Italy revealed 4 tons
. This
trend was
rose dramatically to approximately 6 Unnecessary verb
apply
tons
in 1977, and continue to shoot up until below 8 tons
in 2007. This
pattern followed
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was followed
with
Portugal which had a sharp shot up from approximately 1 Change preposition
by
tons
to below 6 Change to a singular noun
ton
tons
in 2007.
On the other hand
, the number of emission
per person in Sweden experienced a gradual rise from approximately 9 Change to a plural noun
emissions
tons
to above 10 tons
. Surprisingly, this
trend did not last
long,
and began to decline in the following year, which indicated 7 Remove the comma
apply
tons
in 1987, and below 6 tons
in the last
period. The United Kingdom also
experienced the same situation, which showed 11 tons
in the first year, then
experienced to fall until approximately 9 tons
.Submitted by rafiaufa18 on
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