Nowadays, many people choose to be self-employed rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could the disadvantages of being self-employed?

Success in work has many ways, some people have chosen to work in big companies,

while

others have tried to do it by themselves. There are many disadvantages for them when they want to be self-employed. In

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essay, I want to share some am going to analyse both advantages and disadvantages of lessons that have been synthesized on the internet

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from start-up.

Firstly

, most self-employed people who are of the younger generation usually tried to be a start-up whilst they were are not a great person. They do not have enough

knowledge

or

experiences

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to manage or develop an idea for

business

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a business

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. In

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case, it is easy for them to become bankrupt or in debt.

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, the founder Khoi Nguyen with the WeFit trademark which is an application on smartphones to

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customers with Gym, Yoga, Boxing and Zumba to save time and money.

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,

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app was not attractive enough to

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customers, so they did not use it, and .

As a result

, it was removed from the google store.

Secondly

, some self-employed people are studying from some great person or following a trend,

while

they don't have enough

capacity

,

knowledge

, and financial capital, it

also

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unsuccessful.

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Nguyen Hoang Hiep, 28 years old, comes from Khanh Hoa province,

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. Hiep followed the trend “give up

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, go back

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to countryside

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”, he has given up a job with a high salary in the city, more than 20 million

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and

/month, and startup on agriculture in the countryside.

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his study was on economics,

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his choice was on organic farming in agriculture to do. He didn't have enough

knowledge

and

capacity

to control diseases. So, he has failed consecutively and lost

financial

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capacity

to recover his work.

In contrast

to unsuccessful cases, some of the self-employed

also

become a businessman by their will and help.

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Nguyen Thanh Dong, who is the son of the director of a company in Hanoi city, wants to start-up

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30 hectares Mint farm by himself in Ninh Thuan province.

First,

he

also

has troubles with management and control of his farm, but his parents have strong support

about

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financial capital. With the support from his family, he tries to study more experts on agriculture and import more new technologies to build his farm . He tried to find more partners who are especially good at selling in other countries to sign contracts. And now, he is a big Mint exporter in Vietnam and his products are exported to many countries

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Japan, Korea, China and India. In general, if anyone wants to be a self-employed or successful startup person,

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should be thought about

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risks

from

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this

process. It’s not only to have enough

knowledge

, experience, passion, etc. but it’s

also

needed a good financial

capacity

and know how to sell their products to the customers.