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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Disciplinary action action is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of disciplinary action action should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

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The importance of right and wrong action teach them by their parents and teachers at early stages.
However
, I totally disagree with punishment is necessary to teach their
mistakes
 . There are ways in which we can make them realize of
mistakes
 which will help them to grow with
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mindset
.
Moreover
, I consider there are other strategies to transmit good values to young people.
Firstly
,
mistakes
 done by students
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 not very big issues they easily understand the importance
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 little help.
For example
, If
student
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a student
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 draws something on
wall
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the wall
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 or throws trash on
floor
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 they'll
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 to clean those floors or pick up trash and throw
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dustbin
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the dustbin
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.
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this
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students
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 feel responsible and they avoid
this kind
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things
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of things
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 and shape their
mindset
 in
positive
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 way.
Furthermore
, if kids
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 for a wrong action there are high
chances
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 of them becoming introverts and they will get into a strong
mindset
 of fear which will restrict them from opening up to situations.
For instance
,
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 well-known schools students are very smart and they don't have
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 pressure of losing they
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 smart and easily tackle
the
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problem. Because of punishment
in
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 silly
mistakes
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 they trained into
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 positive
mindset
.
To conclude
, students
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 for their
mistakes
 but
in
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 minimal limits not
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badly hurt
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