The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK,divided into 3 categories ,from 1995-2002.

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divided

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in to

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3 different kinds of call

type

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types

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,between 1995 and 2002 in the UK. One

particularly

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point

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that

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highlighted

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by the figure is that

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during

this

period local-fixes line was considerably higher than other types of

phone

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the phone

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call

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calls

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just with some fluctuation between somewhere in the vicinity of 72

minutes

to 90

minutes

between 1995 and 2002 in the UK. The second important call was related to National and

international-fixed

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line

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This

number has slightly increased with at

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least

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minutes

call in 1995 to the maximum call,which was just a low of 60

minutes

in 2002.

According to

the chart,making telephone

call

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calls

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with mobiles(all calls) had striking similarities in its trend with national and international-call.Mobiles

also

has

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rose during

this

period from less than 5

minutes

in 1995 to a peak of 45

minutes

in 2002.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words minutes with synonyms.

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The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK,divided into 3 categories ,from 1995-2002.

Some parents believe that home schooling is more beneficial than the traditional schools. What is your opinion.

Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages.

Some argue that having substantial wealth and limited leisure time is preferable to having less money but more free time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?

Over the last few decades, the media has promoted the image of young thin women as being ideal. what problem has this caused? what solution can you suggest to this issue?