The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK,divided into 3 categories ,from 1995-2002.

The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK,divided into 3 categories ,from 1995-2002.
A glance at the chart provided reveals some information about telephone calls that
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3 different kinds of call
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,between 1995 and 2002 in the UK. One
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by the figure is that
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during
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just with some fluctuation between somewhere in the vicinity of 72
minutes
to 90
minutes
between 1995 and 2002 in the UK. The second important call was related to National and
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.
This
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least
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35
minutes
call in 1995 to the maximum call,which was just a low of 60
minutes
in 2002.
According to
the chart,making telephone
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with mobiles(all calls) had striking similarities in its trend with national and international-call.Mobiles
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rose during
this
period from less than 5
minutes
in 1995 to a peak of 45
minutes
in 2002.
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