In the future, nobody wiil buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.

current
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generation can access everything online ,
such
as education, buy online, keep in touch, and read electronic
newspapers
and
magazines
, so some believe that nobody won't pay to buy printed
newspapers
or
magazines
. I partially agree with it.
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books
or
magazines
is a favourite
works
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of some
people
. they read
book
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books
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or
newspapers
everyday
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and
aware
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of
news
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through
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this
way. in recent years online
books
or
magazines
develop worldwide and many
people
tend to use them
instead
of printed
books
. be available is one reason
,
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because you can access many
books
or
magazines
or
newspapers
, just by
click
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on a website. it's really easy for each person who reads them. in each city or village, you can read any
newspapers
or
books
which you like and
also
download them in a short
of
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time.
moreover
to
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it
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be easy
of
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to
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archive online
books
or
newspapers
or
magazines
is another reason that
people
tend to use
of
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this
method. in comparison
of
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to
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printed
books
and
newspapers
and
magazines
,
archive
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an archive
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of online
books
or
newspapers
are extremely easy. they are stored in a small CD or flash
driver
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. in
fact
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we can store a large volume of them
in
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a CD ,
as a
result
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we can
quick
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access
to
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previous content and
also
it takes up little space to compare printed
newspapers
and
books
which occupy an enormous space.
for
instance
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I had read mehrnameh magazine for ten years and had decided to keep all of them but it would
occupied
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all of my room space ,
therefore
I Member to its website , paid money and download all of them and now
in
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on
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my
computer
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I have all versions of
this
magazines
without they're occupying any physical volume.
on the other
hand
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some
people
have
difficult
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to read
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reading
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electronic
newspapers
or
books
because they should stare at
monitor
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the monitor
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for hours and it causes
they
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them
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complain
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of eye strain and blurred vision ,
in
addition
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stare
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at
monitor
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irritated their
eye
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. so they like to read printed
newspapers
and
magazines
or
books
in place of online
books
.
for
example
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my uncle has eye strain and
concentrate
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on a screen is too
trouble
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for him
as a consequence
he read printed
books
.
to sum up
,
however
staring at a monitor is difficult but I personally believe that to be available and to be easy for archive cause that many
people
won't read printed
books
or
newspapers
in the future so I partially agree with
this
issue.
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