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current
generation can access everything online , Add an article
the current
such
as education, buy online, keep in touch, and read electronic newspapers
and magazines
, so some believe that nobody won't pay to buy printed newspapers
or magazines
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people
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newspapers
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are aware
news
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the news
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in
this
way. in recent years online books
or magazines
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books
or magazines
or newspapers
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newspapers
or books
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apply
moreover
to
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it
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to
books
or newspapers
or magazines
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to
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and newspapers
and magazines
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an archive
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drive
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on
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previous content and Change preposition
apply
also
it takes up little space to compare printed newspapers
and books
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instance
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occupy
therefore
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on
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magazines
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people
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difficulty
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reading
newspapers
or books
because they should stare at monitor
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the monitor
a monitor
they
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staring
monitor
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the monitor
eye
. so they like to read printed Fix the agreement mistake
eyes
newspapers
and magazines
or books
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example
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concentrating
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won't read printed books
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