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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made

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Many manufactured food and drink
products
 contain
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high
level
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levels
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 of
sugar
, which causes many
health
 problems. specialists believe that the sugary
products
prices
 should
increase
 to encourage
people
 to consume less
sugar
. I totally agree with
this
 idea. these days eating food or drinking sugary
products
increase
 among
people
 and it causes many diseases and problems among them. Increasing their
prices
 is a method to avoid
of
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them.
this
 idea has two great reasons.
First
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 of ,all it leads to
reduce
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 diseases among
people
 who consume sugary
products
,
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because to be expensive of them cause
people
 to buy fewer
them
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 owing to as an economic aspect it doesn't economically viable
as a result
people
's consumption of sugary
products
 decreases plus some diseases
such
 as diabetes eliminate among them and
also
 they less pay for
health
 issues.
for example
according to
 harward university research, after increasing
prices
 of sugary
products
 in United States between 1995 to 2005 , the number of
people
 who has diabetes decreased 15 per cent.
in
addition
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grow
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 up
of
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 food or drink
prices
 which have much
sugar
 can change
people
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people's
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lifestyle
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.
this
 procedure causes
people
change
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 their eating habits and tend to consume healthy foods or drinks which have less
sugar
,
therefore
 it leads to
increase
health
 and
reduced
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in
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obesity among
people
at
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 different ages. for ,
instance
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 I have a cousin who lives in Swiss. he used to buy sugary drinks a lot and it caused
he
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became
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 overweight. After the government established a rule which increased sugary drinks price, he changed his eating habits and could decrease his weight. in conclusion ,
to
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be expensive
of
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sugary
products
 lead to
increase
health
 and change in lifestyle and eating habits among
people
which
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both
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of
them
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 are beneficial for
individual
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the individual
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 and
also
 for society.
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