You are going to spend your vacation in Rome, Italy. Your friend's grandfather lives there and has offered to let you stay in his apartment. Write a letter to your friend's grandfather. In your letter: Thank him for the offer but politely decline infrom him of when you will be in Rome and your travel plans invite him for an outing.

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Dear Ron, How are you recently? I am writing to thank you for your generous offer to let me stay with you and your wife when I stay in

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summer. It will be my honour to spend some time with you as your daughter always share interesting stories about you and her with me and she described you as a knowledgeable and humorous person. Unfortunately, I am not able to stay at your place

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time as I am travelling with 4 of my cousins and we have already rented a house in

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, it does not mean that we can not meet up during my visit and I would like to invite you and your wife to have dinner together. My vacation in

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begins on the 5th of July and I will stay in

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for 6 days, till the 11th of July. During my stay, my cousins and I will mainly stay in the city centre and visit different museums and heritages. Please tell me if you have any free time to have dinner with us, and we can adjust our itinerary and fit it

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, it will be great if you and your wife are able to join one of the

daytours

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with us. I am looking forward to your reply and can not wait to meet you in the coming summer. Best regards, Jennifer

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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6 paragraphs

236 words

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