The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram provides information about the process by which
bricks
are produced for the purpose of the construction trade.
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Overall
, it can be said that the procedure by which manufactured Linking Words
bricks
is a multistep linear, which consists of seven stages, the first stage begin with digging the soil and culminating in the delivery of Use synonyms
bricks
to customers.
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To begin
with, clay is collected by a big digger which acts as a raw material for brick manufacturing. Following Linking Words
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, blocks of clay are placed on a metal grid for grinding them. Linking Words
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, the clay is filtered and processed in a roller machine and Linking Words
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mixed with sand and water. In the next procedure, the mixture is either moulded or cut using a wire cutter to give the raw Linking Words
bricks
a shape.
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Furthermore
, the Linking Words
bricks
are put in a drying oven, where it remains for 2-3 days. Use synonyms
Following
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this
, the Linking Words
bricks
are heated in a kiln to a moderate temperature which is 200-900 degrees and Use synonyms
then
it is kept at a high temperature in the range of 870-1300 degrees. Linking Words
Subsequently
, in a cooling chamber where it is cooled for 48 to 72 hours and Linking Words
then
the Linking Words
bricks
are ready for packaging and Use synonyms
finally
delivered to the consumers.Linking Words
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