The pie graph below shows how electricity is produced in Ireland and the table shows the primary reasons for using electricity in the same country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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pie depicts how electricity is produced in Ireland and the table shows the primary reasons for using energy products in the same region. It clear from the graph

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.

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Ireland.

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we can see

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same

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proportion

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% in the same country.

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the important things

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by local is goal and gas.

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whereas

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products

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pepole

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people

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