some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled.They say that the only way to increase recyclingis for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

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present era,
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population add more waste things to
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. Even they have
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to recycle. In my opinion,
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government
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should take legal
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to protect the world. At present,
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number of
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will lead to
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more garbage.
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, governments
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the
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control
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collecting used things and human doesn’t have enough idea about the
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related
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.
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,
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have many
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regarding
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process
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. Some claimed that all the responsibilities
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and they have paid
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for
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issue.
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,
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government
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failed to get action.
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,
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method will be good if it starts from
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.
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is the basic point which has minimum wastages.
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, they have so many
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such
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government
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should give the instruction and the
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basic
knowledge about
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reusing
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plastic and garbage. By the way,
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legal action should apply
for
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to
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this
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process
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,
people
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won’t start
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process
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. As an example,
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the
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who are throwing waste thing to the rivers and
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should remand.
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,
municipal
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council should apply
high
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tax
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taxes
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.
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, the environment and
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human gets
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benefits.
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can produce organic chemicals at
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. Most
of
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the
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people
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think
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difficult to
doing
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with their busy lifestyle.
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, more
persons
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are not going to start.
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, putting the law on society will change the
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of
people
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.
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, the thinking patterns of
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human can
be
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only change
according to
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the
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legal action.
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, my recommendation is to start recycling
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at
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home
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by getting more
actions
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action
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from putting laws.
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