The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007
A glance at the graph reveals the report of average carbon dioxide (Co2) emissions per individual in several countries (United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal) from 1967 to 2007.
Overall
, it is obvious that from the graph Italy and Portugal showed an upward trend, whereas
The UK and Sweden indicated a downward trend. Interestingly, although
The UK showed a negative trend but
they stood at Remove the conjunction
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In 1967, Italy and Portugal started from a different numbers
, which at around 1 and 4 Correct the article-noun agreement
different numbers
a different number
tonnes
respectively. Two years later, Portugal climbed gradually to approximately 3 tonnes
then
rocketed to approximately 5 tonnes
before plateauing at the end
of the period
. ,Meanwhile Italy experienced a rise sharply to over 6 tonnes
in the early two years then
rose slightly to around 8 tonnes
in 2007.
Initially
, Sweden stood at over 8 at the beginning of the period
, then
jumped to over 10 tonnes
in 1977, this
number hit the peak of average before dropping significantly to under 6 tonnes
in 2007. Meanwhile, The UK started at over 10 tonnes
in 1967 then
fell gradually over the period
. Interestingly, they still stood the highest number in that case.Submitted by iamlearner9697 on
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