The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007
A glance at the graph reveals the report of average carbon dioxide (Co2) emissions per individual in several countries (United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal) from 1967 to 2007.
Overall
, it is obvious that from the graph Italy and Portugal showed an upward trend,
whereas
The UK and Sweden indicated a downward trend. Interestingly,
although
The UK showed a negative trend
but
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they stood at
a
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highest level throughout the
period
. In 1967, Italy and Portugal started from
a different numbers
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, which at around 1 and 4
tonnes
respectively. Two years later, Portugal climbed gradually to approximately 3
tonnes
then
rocketed to approximately 5
tonnes
before plateauing
at the end
of the
period
. ,Meanwhile Italy experienced a rise sharply to over 6
tonnes
in the early two years
then
rose slightly to around 8
tonnes
in 2007.
Initially
, Sweden stood at over 8 at the beginning of the
period
,
then
jumped to over 10
tonnes
in 1977,
this
number hit the peak of average before dropping significantly to under 6
tonnes
in 2007. Meanwhile, The UK started at over 10
tonnes
in 1967
then
fell gradually over the
period
. Interestingly, they still stood the highest number in that case.
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