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Nowadays eating habits of people around the world are changing, causing them many problems, including obesity. Why do people tend to eat so badly? What can be done to improve their eating habits?

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Human eating habits were changing in
this
 period.
This
 resulted in health issues
such
 as diabetes and obesity. The causes and solutions of the given topic will be discussed in the essay.
To begin
 with, the reasons why some people do not consider their eating styles. There are many reasons.
Firstly
, healthy goods are expensive more than unhealthy goods
for instance
 fried chicken is cheaper than salad.
Moreover
, the taste of that cuisine is better than a diet meal.
Therefore
, some of them select to eat unhealthy
food
 to save money.
Secondly
, tend of fast
food
 is popular, some people consume bad cuisine because they are followed by influencers on social media like TikTok.
Furthermore
, it is easy for younger to access to those social media which
also
 increases the rate of obesity in children.
However
, there are some people that would like to change their eating habits to maintain their health. To solve the problem,the government should support healthy cuisine and
also
 reduce taxes for sellers that sell that kind of
food
. Hopefully, the type of healthy
food
 will be more varied and less costly in the future.
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