The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph gives
the
information about Australia’s five city consumer’s Correct article usage
apply
behavior
in consuming Change the spelling
behaviour
coffee
and tea.
Overall
, it is clear that
Australians prefer buying instant coffee
to fresh coffee
. In addition
, residents of Melbourne, Sydney and Hobart went to a cafe to drink their beverages more than other
two city dwellers.
In terms of purchasing fresh Correct article usage
the other
coffee
, over 40% of Sydney and Melbourne residents bought it, but others took below 40%. On the other hand
, more than 50% of Brisbane and Hobart residents preffered
buying instant Correct your spelling
preferred
coffee
to fresh coffee
.
Lastly
, although
more than 60% of people lives
in Melbourne, Sydney, Change the verb form
live
Correct word choice
and Hobarts
Hobarts
visited Correct your spelling
Hobart
cafe
for beverages, Add an article
the cafe
but
slightly over 50% Correct word choice
apply
Brisbane
dwellers and only approximately 50% of Adelaide dwellers went to a cafe for enjoying Change preposition
of Brisbane
coffee
or tea.Submitted by 98shs on
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