The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph gives
the
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information about Australia’s five city consumer’s
behavior
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behaviour
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in consuming
coffee
and tea.
Overall
,
it is clear that
Australians prefer buying instant
coffee
to fresh
coffee
.
In addition
, residents of Melbourne, Sydney and Hobart went to a cafe to drink their beverages more than
other
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two city dwellers. In terms of purchasing fresh
coffee
, over 40% of Sydney and Melbourne residents bought it, but others took below 40%.
On the other hand
, more than 50% of Brisbane and Hobart residents
preffered
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preferred
buying instant
coffee
to fresh
coffee
.
Lastly
,
although
more than 60% of people
lives
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in Melbourne, Sydney,
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and Hobarts
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Hobarts
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Hobart
visited
cafe
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the cafe
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for beverages,
but
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slightly over 50%
Brisbane
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of Brisbane
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dwellers and only approximately 50% of Adelaide dwellers went to a cafe for enjoying
coffee
or tea.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • coffee
  • tea
  • buying habits
  • drinking habits
  • Australian cities
  • consumption
  • respondents
  • regular
  • participants
  • levels
  • observed
  • popular
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