The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the industrial production process of
Overall, the manufacturing of
noodlesconsists of eight stages and uses flour powder as a raw material.
Moreover, other ingredients
suchas oil and water are added into the
furtherstages. First of all, a great deal of flour is kept in the storage silos and transferred to the mixer.
Then, doughs are made by stirring oil, water and flour powder together until the mixture is completely well-mixed. After the following steps, to become noodle strips, the mixed dough is ground by the rollers to make it sheet-shaped and cut into several pieces. In order to store
noodlesin the containers, noodle strips are placed in the circle plate moulds and dehydrated by drying cooking with some oil at a high temperature to carry out the disc-shaped
noodlesare stored in the cups
along withsome vegetables and spice powder.
Lastly, the full cup of
noodlesis labelled and ready to be sold.
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