Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your own opinion.

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In recent times, people tend to try newer things, ranging from
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the type of food they eat.
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few prefer doing routine things, others would like to try out new experiences often. In
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essay, I would like to discuss both views but support my claim on the latter. On the one hand, it is better to be risk averse by sticking up with routine practices, rather than trying out new things.
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is because of the uncertainty that lies with the new experience.
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, individuals who refrain from eating unknown cuisines are generally more health conscious as trying out a new food might not sit well with the body.
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,
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the volatile travel restrictions, especially after the COVID-19 pandemic,
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the raising cost of tourism made people tend to change their attitude toward visiting new
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, trying out new
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and cuisines not only provide an opportunity to explore new cultures but
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improve immunity
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the fact that our body will encounter and endure a variety of new conditions, and their corresponding air-prone bacteria, to
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strengthen immunity.
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, when a person is confined to a single and familiar climatic condition, his body will massively become accustomed to it. Having looked at the sides, one might have an attitude to not try beyond his familiar practices and conditions,
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the advantages of exploring new
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and foods will certainly outweigh not trying out anything new as mentioned in the examples above.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Novelty
  • Routine
  • Comfort zone
  • Risk-taker
  • Risk-averse
  • Enrichment
  • Personal growth
  • Innovation
  • Creativity
  • Stability
  • Tradition
  • Habit
  • Familiarity
  • Personal enrichment
  • Life stages
  • Fulfilling
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