You share your room with another student in the college hostel. You find it very difficult to study there because he or she always has parties and friends visiting. Write a letter to the hostel warden complaining about your displeasure with the room-mate.
Dear Sir or Madam, I'm renting one of your college hostels and writing to inform you of the problems that I have. I'm living with one roommate, Nanami Sato, and she invites her friends every day. Since there is no long time until the annual exam day, I would like to
concern
Wrong verb form
be concerned
on
my Change preposition
about
study
. Fix the agreement mistake
studies
However
, she and her friends' noise always make
it difficult. Correct subject-verb agreement
makes
Moreover
, she has a party every night at our place playing music at a loud volume. So, I even can't sleep well. Although
I asked her to have parties and meetings in other
friend's room, she refused it and Correct quantifier usage
another
contiunes
until now. Correct your spelling
continues
Therefore
, I would like to change my room. If there is no available room in your college hostel, please swap my room-mate
with Correct your spelling
roommate
other
one. I would be grateful if you could solve these problems as soon as possible. Faithfully yours, Ayaka HiokiCorrect pronoun usage
another
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.