the graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods in the UK. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph
The line graph shows the
consumption
of fast food in the UK from 1970 to 1990 and it was divided into three parts.
Overall
, it was clear that the public was more likely to spend their money on hamburger
and Fix the agreement mistake
hamburgers
fish
& chips
as time go by. On the counterpart, citizens did not like eating pizza as they used to .
Fish
& chips
and hamburgers all had a rising trend, but the consumption
of Fish
& chips
was soar from 1980 to 1990(150~500). Besides
, the expenditure on hamburgers also
has a gradual increase which was 90 in 1980 to 290 in 1990. The consumption
of pizza is the largest part at the beginning, which was 300 in 1970. However
, it dramatically decreased until 1985 reached the lowest point(200), then
it had a slight increase between 1985 and 1990. In the end, Fish
& chips
owned the largest consumption
in 1990, which was 500. The second large part was hamburgers (about 300).Submitted by 1225584991 on
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