Some people say in order to prevent illness and disease governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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governments

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should pay attention

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problems

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which relate to

environment

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the environment

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and houses with the aim of preventing

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ailments

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and sickness. The writer totally agrees with that statement and holds the opinion that the

governments

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have the responsibility to ensure the quality of

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individuals'

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lives. It is vital to understand that many

illness

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illnesses

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and

disease

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diseases

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come from

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pollution in nature like pollution in the air, the water or especially in the land, which causes a detrimental effect not just

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the Earth but

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the individuals. Contamination can easily damage one's health and lead to a lot of drastic issues

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as infection,

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cardiovascular

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and blood circulation. Take the

governments

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in Japan as a good example , who invest a lot in the specific infrastructure to reduce the pollution

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every year,

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, it leads to positive changes

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the citizens nearby, especially

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their health.

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,

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governments

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should think of the way to prevent sickness by tackling environmental

problems

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. It should

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be considered that housing issues are

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the factor which

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sickness to the people. Living in a grubby house can lead to a lot of health

problems

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which

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bases

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on respiratory issues and other symptoms. For that reason,

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apply

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governments

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should focus more on

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these

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daunting

problems

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so as

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to promote the disease and deter the proliferation of unhealthy

virus

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viruses

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.

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,

low quality

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low-quality

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home equipment and systems ,

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as heating, plumbing and air conditioning may increase the risk of exposure to carbon monoxide , leas and airborne illnesses.

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, the

governments

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should

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care about the reduction in housing

problems

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. In conclusion , the

governments

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have

their

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responsibility to ensure the cost of living

of

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each

individuals

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. It has been demonstrated in

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essay that the more attention that the

governments

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pay

for

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preventing illness, the more effective

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it can

lead to

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.