Some students prefer to take a gap year between highschool and university, to work or to travel. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

#students #gap #year #highschool #university #work #travel #outweigh

In the present day, a lot of youths consider

to take

Change the verb form

taking

show examples

a gap

year

after high school and university since there are many

clearly

Change the adverb

clear

show examples

benefits to themselves. I believe that the advantages of

such

opinion

Correct article usage

an opinion

show examples

outweight

Correct your spelling

outweigh

the drawbacks and will discuss

Correct pronoun usage

them in

show examples

the essay. First of all, the positive aspect of taking a

year

off is that students could have time to explore their preferences. Many children

deceide

Correct your spelling

decide

to study

Change preposition

apply

show examples

what they do not interested

Change preposition

in.

show examples

As a result

, they have to transfer to another major or university.

Therefore

, it would be better to know what you are really interested in before taking any decision. Another plus point is that youths could learn various things aside from study courses.

For example

, they could work as a cashier or waiter. Meanwhile, they could talk to many customers and learn

their

Change preposition

about their

show examples

cultures, languages and their story experiences.

Although

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

taking a gap

year

have a lot of benefits, it

also

has a downside. One of

major

Add an article

the major

show examples

negative aspects is that they might be left behind

from

Change preposition

show examples

their

freinds

Correct your spelling

friends

For instance

, those friends

many

Correct your spelling

may

show examples

talk

Change to a plural noun

talks

show examples

or interested in some things that you can not catch up or they might talk about work and income

while

you

are still be

Change the verb form

are still

show examples

a student. These might negatively affect

Change preposition

apply

show examples

gap

year

students feeling. In conclusion,

this

essay feels that taking a

year

off has more pros than cons.

Therefore

, there is no reason why should not

taking

Wrong verb form

take

show examples

year

off.

Submitted by ak.porawan on Mon Mar 06 2023

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

9Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
18Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

243 words

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

7
band
Q) Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoid any change. others, however, think that change is always a good thing. discuss both views and give your opinion.
Today, work-life balance is a viral societal debate. Some people argue that maintaining a robust consistent routine while dodging minimal changes is the ultimate way to live. Others, however, disagree and prefer to get the utmost out of life by changing their skin constantly. I believe that life, in general, is a daring adventure or nothing. In this context, it is a matter of debate.
4
band
Today more and more people want things instantly(eg:goods,service,news).Why is this?Is this positive or negative development?
In the present day,the majority of people all want instant things thus wanting to have immediate results.This author believes that this is a negative phenomenon due to causing the annoying between people and wasting money in fast ship.
4.5
band
A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work.You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter. explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful give details of when you would be available for work
I'm Arthur, I'm writing this letter to you in order to work in your museum as a volunteer media assistant.
<4
band
Nowadays an increasing numbers of profession such as doctors and teachers are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What can done to solve this. #numbers #profession #doctors #teachers #countries #work
Due to the rapid growth of technology , the world has come a long way therefore the lifestyle of people has changed a lot in the past few years . In the cutting-edge era , the world become a global village . In the current scenario , it becomes very common to migrate to cities or other countries in order to find better job opportunities and lifestyles. In this contemporary epoch , it is very common to see professions like doctors , engineers and teachers leave their country to work in foreign countries . There is a range of conflicting arguments related to the assertion but every every setback comes a solution . In the succeeding monograph, I intend to delve into the setbacks as well as proffer remedies to curb this menace .
6.5
band
Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Arguments appear between people who believe that learning a foreign language is only for travelling or working abroad purposes, whereas, others believe there are many reasons for studying a foreign language. I strongly agree with the latter opinion.

Some students prefer to take a gap year between highschool and university, to work or to travel. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Word Count

Q) Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoid any change. others, however, think that change is always a good thing. discuss both views and give your opinion.

Today more and more people want things instantly(eg:goods,service,news).Why is this?Is this positive or negative development?

Nowadays an increasing numbers of profession such as doctors and teachers are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What can done to solve this. #numbers #profession #doctors #teachers #countries #work

Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion