The bar chart illustrates the proportion of people who consumed five portions of fruits and vegetables per day in the UK over 8 years, which is from 2001 to 2008.

The bar chart illustrates the proportion of people who consumed five portions of fruits and vegetables per day in the UK over 8 years, which is from 2001 to 2008.
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The bar chart depicts the number of people(men, women and children) who ate fruits and vegetables in a day in Great Britain between 2001 and 2008.
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, females and males eat more than children throughout the given period.
In addition
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, the figures for all of them increased moderately. In 2001, the percentage of women eating fruits and vegetables accounted for about 20% and rose gradually until reaching its peak of just over a third in the year 2006.
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these figures decreased slightly to about 28%
at the end
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of the period.
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, the number of men consuming fruits and vegetables grew slowly and remained unchanged at approximately 28% from 2006 to 2008. The proportion of minors who ate
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type of food increased gradually as well. In the first three years, the figures stayed constant at roughly 18% and
then
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started increasing until hitting a peak nearly just over
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half in 2007 and declined slightly to 23% in the year 2008.
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