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The beat way to understand other cultures is to work for a multinational organization. To what extent to you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any examples.

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In
this
 present scenario, there is a drastic change in
way
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the way
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 of learning Among people as compared to bygone days. It is a widely acknowledged fact that the best way to know about other
cultures
 is through working in national companies. I agree with
this
 statement in upcoming paragraphs prior to a reasonable conclusion. To commence with,
this
 trend has main
one
 reason how
one
 can understand other
cultures
. The first and foremost point is that in multinational corporations, employees
invite
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are invited
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 to different kinds of parties
such
 as the new year, Halloween and other important social events which leads to understanding their social nature
as well as
 Knowledge of customs and traditions.
Thus
, it would
beneficial
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be beneficial
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 for improving information regarding other
cultures
.
Furthermore
, multinational helps to increase knowledge related to other cultural values from different individuals.
Firstly
, workers need to stay under
one
 working condition where not only share social experience but
also
 practical ways to work
then
 they
mixed
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mix
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 with each other.
Moreover
, it helps to create peace between
multi
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multiple
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 countries.
For instance
,
according to
 media reviews, they show that national company workers do their tasks in unity which
spread
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spreads
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 messages about positivity all over the world.
Hence
, it reduces misunderstandings between
one
 to another nation. In conclusion, I want to say that working in multinational enterprises provides a different way to learn and understand
cultures
 through practical and social.
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