The chart below shows the presentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011

The chart below shows the presentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011
The bar chart illustrates the rate of
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owned and rented
houses
in
Englind
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England
and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
According to
the chart in 1918 rented
houses
are more popular than
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owned
houses
but it rapidly
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decreased
into 2011. In 1971 both rented and owned
houses
are equalled it is 50
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owned
houses
populity
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popularity
gradually increasing. In 2011 it has gone to 65
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, it is bobble in 2011. 2001 it
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higher
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it
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70
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