The chart below shows the presentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011
The bar chart illustrates the rate of
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owned and rented Change preposition
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houses
in Englind
and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
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England
According to
the chart in 1918 rented houses
are more popular than the
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houses
but it rapidly dicresed
into 2011. In 1971 both rented and owned Correct your spelling
decreased
houses
are equalled it is 50 percent
.
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per cent
The
owned Correct your spelling
They
houses
populity
gradually increasing. In 2011 it has gone to 65 Correct your spelling
popularity
percent
, it is bobble in 2011. 2001 it Change the spelling
per cent
present
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a higher
it
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about
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of
near
70 Change the word
nearly
percent
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per cent
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