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Developed countries have created many environmental problems. What can be done to reduce the danger of global warming

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Global warming and climate change has been increased rapidly result of many developed
countries'
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 policies and
growing
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in
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population. In
this
 essay , I will discuss how we can reduce environmental problems is done by first class
countries
 for 2 reasons ; jumped in population and the responses of the metropolis. First of all , we all should agree that developed
countries
such
 as the US , the UK , and
EU
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the EU
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countries
 have been leading to ecological problems
such
 as a rising carbon footprint , climate crisis and changes
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sea levels because of the
amount
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 of people.
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Municipalities
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Municipality
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 have been enlarged with factories , car industries and expanded residential areas. The first problem that we will mention is unsustainable urban designs. If the cities can take
of
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the idea of environmentally sustainable urban design and morphed it into a rich and full vision of a fresh way to live in inner capital
such
 as Amsterdam , Helsinki , and Paris , adding progressive notions about liveability, environmental compatibility , fiscal management , entrepreneurial governance and inclusive public engagement they can make pervasively change on the environment. The other solution may be given by governments to the citizens , heighten awareness of how we can protect our world without regretting city life. Potencies should encourage society to reuse , recycle and conserve.
Moreover
 , ecological moves should be put into curriculums that the children can learn.
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 , many policies can make a big difference and by adding
individually
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 development we can reduce
to
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the danger of global warming.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global warming
  • environmental problems
  • renewable energy
  • energy efficiency
  • environmental regulations
  • sustainable transportation
  • awareness
  • education
  • international cooperation
  • reforestation
  • afforestation
  • carbon emissions
  • carbon pricing
  • green building practices
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