Learning at university would be more effective if men and women were educated separately. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is thought that the allocation of men and women to different

classes

would be more beneficial for

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education quality. I mostly disagree with

this

suggestion because of its social and educational drawbacks

on

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university

students

.

Firstly

, separated

classes

may allow some problems

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students

in

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their social skills. In separated

classes

,

students

may be more comfortable and

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in their speech and attitude.

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, in the long term, it would give negative impacts

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their personality. To illustrate that, men may become much ruder and women may become much shier gradually. Both genders may forget how to behave their cross genders in time. They lose

their

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times

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to recover their attitudes and social relationships in

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society. In short, because

of

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social relationships have a part of

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education in

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universities,

this

idea may create negative results.

Secondly

,

conversely

to

this

suggestion, these allocated

classes

may lead to

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studying quality among

students

.

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is because

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in mixed

classes

, both genders share and discuss their ideas

hence

, their discussions

more

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versatile and informative than the separated

classes

.

For example

, women’s point of view would be different

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men’s about

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climate change or caring

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orphaned children.

Although

, it would be not important in the scientific branches, usually different

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ideas and

discussion

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are needed

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improvement

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of university studies.

Thus

, separated

classes

erect a barrier to the cross genders’ idea

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. In conclusion, causes and examples can be multiplied with

this

suggestion.

Although

,

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separated

classes

might provide a

slight

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positive impact

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scientific studies, in my opinion,

this

idea would show detrimental impacts

in

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students

’ behaviour and education.