The table shows independent film releases by genre in the UK and Republic of Ireland in 2012.

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in the year 2012.

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, the majority of released made up comedy, drama and documentary genres

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biopics, action and romance were the least preferred in the two countries. Money generated from ticket sales by comedy and horror was the most common. As it is evident, drama and documentary had relatively similar statistics in release amount (35) and 23.6% for all productions with 8.3% and 2.9% of sales, respectively. 26 comedies experienced the largest income at 45.4% followed by 14 horrors with 20.2% revenue. Refering to the least popular genre, biopics and action comprised

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0.7% and 2.7% of all productions earning 8.3% and 4.1% of the money, in turn. In the case of remaining releases,

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crime, stood at 4.7% in total, romance at 3.4%,

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the other 8 types of films constituted 5.4% of all issues. Eventually, the total number of films was 148, 100% of all releases providing 100% of earnings from tickets.

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The table illustrates
data on
independent film releases
by genre
in the UK and Republic of Ireland
highest number of releases
most popular genre
second most popular
significant number of releases
relatively fewer releases
lowest number of releases
overall
common genres
substantial presence
moderate number of releases
least number of releases
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distribution of
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The table shows independent film releases by genre in the UK and Republic of Ireland in 2012.

Today more and more tourist are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctica. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

You have recently visited a building which is of historical importance and came to know that it's in bad condition. Write a letter to local newspaper office. Which building it is? What are the problems? What do you expect them to do?

Governments should focus their spending on public services rather than on the art (e.g. Music and painting). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some products can be made quickly by a machine. Other items take a long time to be made by hand. As a buyer, which do you prefer and why? Give specific details and examples in your answer.