You recently moved to a new house and you want to invite an old friend to stay with you. Write a letter to your friend. In you letter, - invite him to stay and suggest a date - briefly describe the new house and garden - say why you like your new house. You should write atleast 150 words. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin you letter as follows: Dear Jimmy,

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I'm

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letter to inform you that

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already moved to another

house

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last

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month.

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I'm

inviting you to stay with me for a couple of days,

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assure you that you enjoy your stay here in our new

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. What about

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coming weekend,

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21 and 22, if you are available on that date

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You really enjoy here because we have a big and

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garden, full of plants and flowers, Our new

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is a two-story

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with a huge terrace and four medium size rooms, our sala

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karaoke

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machine so we can sing whatever we want. Aside from that the location of our new

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is almost

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accessible

from the beach to

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centerm

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centre

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or if you go to the park . if we go to

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only fifteen minutes to go to

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, and

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go to the city

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ride, really you enjoy

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you come here. Please inform me in advance when you decide to join me here for a few days so that

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can prepare your room. Hope you can decide very soon. Regards, Julianna

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

194 words

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The Greeting

Technology is becoming progressively universal. In the fullness of time, classroom teachers will be totally substituted for technology. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that it is better to raise children in the countryside, while others think that cities offer more opportunities for a child’s development. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In many countries around the world , rural people are moving to cities , so the population in the countryside is decreasing.

Nuclear power is used both for weapons of mass destruction and the production of cheap, clean energy. Do the advantages of nuclear power outweigh the disadvantages?