With deforestation, urbanization and illegal hunting, may animal species be becoming endangered as they lose their habitat, and some are even to the point of extinction. Do you think it is important to protect animals? What measures can be taken to deal with this problem?

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extermination may provoke devastating conditions for

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threat of losing

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or even extinct at

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. Undoubtedly, as I see, maintaining the fauna is

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crucial factor as

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supporters of biodiversity.

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and government's contributions would become a vital aspect to save the creature's populations. With no

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uncertainty, It is absolutely important to take care of any

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of

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mankind.

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children

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literature and ending with the saint books,

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had taken a role as

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supporters and companions as well. Thereby, there is no

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guarantee that

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humankind would

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so intensively without

animals

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are usually aiding people on the large scale, in

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addition

,huge amounts of

species

keep the

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of the vegetation they live in.

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wheat by consuming

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harmful insects.As gratitude, local villagers are feeding the rodents up, thereby,providing mutual benefit for crops and hamsters respectively. Notwithstanding, certain creatures are becoming extremely rare because of the hunters and the light punishments they are often sentenced with.

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frivolous

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of both people and the government could easily turn into inevitably distractive

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of the large disappearance even of common

species

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, to avoid

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consequences there are no

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ways but planning a long-term operation regarding exclusively the environment.

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, the hot spots where

animals

are being endangered the most should be provided with

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special camps with the experts like biologists and vet doctors. Thereby,by suspicious

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behaviour which may

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resemble

a disease, medicians can immediately take needed measures. To wrap up,

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humanity has all the chances to implement the ecological plans, Eventually,by normalizing the situation the atmosphere in the world is promising to be more soothing.