Having a gun at home is allowed in the USA. Do you agree with that statement? give your opinion

Nowadays, in some countries like the USA, having a gun at home is allowed,

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fact causes citizens insecurity, since these can be obtained in stores that sell to anyone

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. I do not agree with

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law at all, since, as has been demonstrated, the

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of weapons against children and adolescents in schools

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has caused various deaths through no fault of the victims, since many times they are not even known, and not only

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but there are many adults who

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them to shamelessly kill innocent people, sometimes even their own families. The free obtaining of

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means that many people who are not capable

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can buy one to take justice on their own, and these feel powerful. As we have seen in some news recently, the police themselves sometimes make

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of these without

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for reasons of racism, these being protected by the country's justice since they say that they

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them in

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, when it has been shown that

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is not the case because they shoot before asking. In my opinion, no one should have a weapon at home for the power that

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offers to the owner, because is not a natural power,

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he can

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the weapon to do evil, and not protect himself as in

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those who agree to sell

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say it. If no human being could have the option of owning a weapon, no one would have to defend themselves, the

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of violence should not be tolerated in any way, especially when the news shows us that many times they cause

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of innocents who cannot defend themselves. In

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I’m in total disagreement with the

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, and they have to forbid them

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because the people have to resolve the problems talking and not with

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