Having a gun at home is allowed in the USA. Do you agree with that statement? give your opinion
Nowadays, in some countries like the USA, having a gun at home is allowed,
this
fact causes citizens insecurity, since these can be obtained in stores that sell to anyone that
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who
want
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wants
it
. I do not agree with Correct pronoun usage
them
this
law at all, since, as has been demonstrated, the use
of weapons against children and adolescents in schools,
has caused various deaths through no fault of the victims, since many times they are not even known, and not only Remove the comma
apply
this
,
but there are many adults who Remove the comma
apply
use
them to shamelessly kill innocent people, sometimes even their own families. The free obtaining of guns
means that many people who are not capable to administrate
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of administrating
this
can buy one to take justice on their own, and these feel powerful. As we have seen in some news recently, the police themselves sometimes make use
of these without sense
for reasons of racism, these being protected by the country's justice since they say that they Add an article
a sense
use
them in self-defense
, when it has been shown that Change the spelling
self-defence
this
is not the case because they shoot before asking. In my opinion, no one should have a weapon at home for the power that this
offers to the owner, because is not a natural power, also
he can use
the weapon to do evil, and not protect himself as in theory
those who agree to sell Add a comma
theory,
guns
say it. If no human being could have the option of owning a weapon, no one would have to defend themselves, the use
of violence should not be tolerated in any way, especially when the news shows us that many times they cause deaths
of innocents who cannot defend themselves. In Correct article usage
the deaths
conclusion
I’m in total disagreement with the Add a comma
conclusion,
use
of guns
, and they have to forbid them,
because the people have to resolve the problems talking and not with Remove the comma
apply
guns
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite