Some educationalists say that every child should be taught how to play a musical instrument. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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a musical

instrument

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inexorably in recent years, there is an opinion that the teaching of playing

musical

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instrument

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instruments

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should be given to all

children

.

Although

it can bring a number of benefits to young people, I disagree with

this

view because I think

it’s

unnecessary in many situations. On the one hand, it is beneficial

to

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children

to play an

instrument

. It can inspire young people with a sense of accomplishment and foster their self-esteem. As a child learns to play an

instrument

and become more proficient, they may experience a sense of achievement and boast about their progress.

In addition

,

children

also

enhance their concentration and discipline

along with

the ability to play an

instrument

.

For example

, when

children

stand in front of their friends or

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, if they can read the

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sheet music or play an

instrument

, it makes them feel more confident and

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to express their skills.

On the other hand

, I believe

it’s

totally unnecessary.

Firstly

, I would contend that young people embark on learning to play an

instrument

. the enormous cost incurred to cover musical instruments and lessons will put a strain on

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coffers leading to

financial

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burden

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and

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not every family can afford.

Secondly

, not every child has an interest in or aptitude for music, simultaneously

it’s

important to respect and encourage their individual interests. Every one of

children

has different talents and skills,

therefore

parents should not impose their minds and desires

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those

childrens

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children

’.

As a result

, caregivers need to support their

children

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in practicing

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practicing

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and learning in the fields that they love to reach their full potential In conclusion, playing a musical

instrument

can support the mental and emotional development of a child.

However

, I think

it’s

unnecessary because a large amount of money

have

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to afford

and

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unfits

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for all

children