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An increasing number of people are choosing cosmetic surgery for changing their appearance. What can be the reasons for this? Do you think it’s a positive or negative development?

#people #surgery #appearance #it’s #development
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 the top illustrates the percentage of the type of
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information about their stipend rate following 5 years of work in various sectors.
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Anthropologist works when they finish university. Meanwhile,
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 income than those working as freelance consultants and in private companies. Regarding the pie
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 52
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, followed by
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time
employment
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 and those without
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 12
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.
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 postgraduate study and unidentified positions at
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similar proportions of 8
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. The cooperation
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part
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graduates
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. In more detail, these sectors share
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 similar pattern with identical figures at the two lowest pay bands, with 5
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 in the $25000 to $49999 range, and 15
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 earning $50000 to 74999 a year.
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for 35
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 of
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 $50,000 to $74,999 and only 10
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 in the lowest income range,
while
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