Recent figures show an increase in violent crime among youngsters under the age of 18. Some psychologists claim that the basic reason for this is that children these days are not getting the social and emotional learning they need from parents and teachers. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this option?

There is no doubt that these days we can see an

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in violent

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among teenagers under 18 years old. The question is, is the basic reason for

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problem that children are not getting social and emotional learning from parents and teachers? In

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essay, I am going to discuss

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option and draw my personal conclusion. In terms of view, if social and emotional learning is absent violent crime will

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increase

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. The main reason given to support

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claim is that social and emotional learning is crucial because it

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children learn how to manage their emotions and how to deal with others. To illustrate, when a child goes somewhere and has no one to deal with things except him

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he will have to use his emotional and social intelligence.

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, if teachers and parents don'

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consider these skills the child will be can'

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learn about them. So we will get a generation which they can not deal with their emotions and attitudes.

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, there are other reasons for the

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in brutality

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, violent games can affect in personalities of youngers.

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, the personality of teenagers can

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very easily by anything.

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, the violent environment around the child can affect his personality.

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is because when he grows up with the family using violence he will harmful in future.

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, people with violent personalities can not guess their reactions in situations. In conclusion,

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get social and emotional learning reason for the rise of

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, there are other reasons for it

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, I believe

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children to learn about how can they manage their emotions and have social intelligence is helping to

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violent

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