The diagrams below show changes that have taken place in the Sawry District neighbourhood since 1920. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The provided maps depict the transformation over a course of a century in the SAWRY district neighbourhood between 1920 and 2020.

Overall

, what stands out from the maps is that neighbourhood has undergone some growth. By 2020, there are more accommodations, more business and a new bridge,

although

some business did not remain intact.

Moreover

, there is less greenery in the transformed neighbourhood. Looking at the map, it can be clearly seen that the cannery industry is transformed into a new office complex on the left side of the city.

Furthermore

, two houses were knocked down;

however

an apartment is built and the road is expanded out of the city, near the elmwood river. A new bridge is added over the elmwood river.

In addition

, a bike path, which replaced the beach, is added along the river. In oak avenue, there are two new houses, a shop and two apartments are introduced.

Additionally

, a petrol station is built in the place of the primary school.

Whereas

, the primary school is expanded and moved closer to oak avenue shops.

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