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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
table
 depicts information about
sales
 of Fairtrade-labelled
coffee
 and
bananas
in
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 1999 to 2004 in five European regions.It is clear
form
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from
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 the two
table
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tables
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 apply amount
sales
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of sales
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 of
coffee
 and
Bananas
during
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over
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 5 years.
According to
 what is shown,
the
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in the
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 first
table
 we can see
ratio
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the ratio
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 the
millions
 of
euros
 for
coffee
sales
 UK in 1999 had 1.5
millions
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million
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of
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euros
 and in 2004
rise
 up to 20 .
While
the
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Denmark in 1999 had 1.8
millions
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million
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of
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euros
 and in 2004
rise
 up to 6.
The
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 second
table
 we can see
proportion
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the proportion
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for
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of
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millions
 of
euros
 for
Bananas
sales
 UK in 1999 had 15
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million
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millions
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million
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of
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euros
 and in 2004
rise
 up to 47.
whereas
 Denmark in 1999 had 0.6
millions
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million
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of
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apply
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euros
 and in 2004
rise
 up to 4.
To sum up
, we could say that
Bananas
has
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 the best
incoms
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income
incomes
 for UK and Denmark has
Coffee
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the lowset
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lowset
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lowest
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incoms
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income
incomes
.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words table, sales, coffee, bananas, millions, euros, rise with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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