The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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bananas
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in
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from
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sales
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of sales
coffee
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Bananas
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during
5 years.
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over
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the
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we can see Use synonyms
ratio
the Correct article usage
the ratio
millions
of Use synonyms
euros
for Use synonyms
coffee
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sales
UK in 1999 had 1.5 Use synonyms
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millions
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million
of
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apply
euros
and in 2004 Use synonyms
rise
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the
Denmark in 1999 had 1.8 Correct article usage
apply
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millions
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million
of
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apply
euros
and in 2004 Use synonyms
rise
up to 6.
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The
second Change preposition
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table
we can see Use synonyms
proportion
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the proportion
for
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of
millions
of Use synonyms
euros
for Use synonyms
Bananas
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sales
UK in 1999 had 15 Use synonyms
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million
millions
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million
of
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apply
euros
and in 2004 Use synonyms
rise
up to 47.Use synonyms
whereas
Denmark in 1999 had 0.6 Linking Words
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millions
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million
of
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apply
euros
and in 2004 Use synonyms
rise
up to 4.
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To sum up
, we could say that Linking Words
Bananas
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has
the best Correct subject-verb agreement
have
incoms
for UK and Denmark has Correct your spelling
income
incomes
Coffee
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the lowset
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lowest
incoms
.Correct your spelling
income
incomes
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