Although there has been a large increase in the numbers of women who go out to work, women continue to do a disproportionate amount of housework and childcare. What can be done to promote greater equality between men and women between the home?
Recently the issue has been brought into focus is the unequal amount of household and childcare that
women
have to do. In my opinion, there is now greater equality between men
and women
in the family these days. However
, women
still tend to assume all the household chores while
men
just only go to work
causing gender inequality in the family. Now i
will discuss some solutions to address Change the capitalization
I
this
situation and encourage better fairness between men
and women
in the family.
One thing that is
of great significance is that people should equally dividing
the household chores and Change the verb form
divide
be dividing
work
between males and females. The government also
responsible Add a missing verb
is also
limiting
the working Change preposition
for limiting
time
for the
Correct article usage
apply
women
or dividing the work
equally between two genders. This
will exert a far-reaching influence on the equality gender
. The most familiar example of Change preposition
of gender
this
is offices should let women
do light works and give female workers less time
of
Replace the word
off
work
to coming
back home early Wrong verb form
come
for
have more Change preposition
to
time
taking
care of their families and Change the verb form
to take
childrens
. Correct your spelling
children
On the other hand
, it seems difficult to do if a man refuses to share or help his woman with housework. It seem
quite clear that many families should balance and share with each other between Change the verb form
seems
works
and personal lives.
Another special considerationFix the agreement mistake
work
in
Add the comma(s)
, in this case,
this
case is that men
should do more Change preposition
of the
the
Correct article usage
apply
houseworks
for their Correct your spelling
housework
house works
woman
. There are many reasons for helping Fix the agreement mistake
women
women
Change noun form
women's
Change preposition
with houseworks
houseworks
. For one thing, Correct your spelling
housework
women
could have more square times to care for their appearence
. For another, Correct your spelling
appearance
women
can allocate reasonable time
for both work
at the office Change to a plural noun
works
as well as
at home. It may give rise to a number of this solution
that people will have abundant leisure to take care of their families and jobs. A better example of Fix the agreement mistake
these solutions
this
can be best provided by men
could
do the laundry, clean the floor or Correct pronoun usage
who could
washing
up in their square Wrong verb form
wash
time
to give a woman a hand. Similarly
, if there are too much
domestic responsibilities, Change the quantifier
many
women
can be more likely to experience stress, as well as
lower their
Replace the word
they're
they are
effectively
at Replace the word
effectiveness
work
and also
impacting
their pay. It makes no difference that Wrong verb form
impact
men
have to give a hand to women
in chores.
In summary, it is important for tackled the
gender inequality in the familyCorrect article usage
apply
and
. We should take action to promote greater equality between Correct word choice
apply
men
and women
within the home.Submitted by sinh.ielts on
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