Some people prefer to listen to music while studying, as music has a calming effect on the mind. Others prefer a pin drop silence in order to concentrate on the content they are studying and have an undivided attention while they do so. Which option works better for you and why do you think the other option is not viable to ensure a successful study time?
Laws
, at Use synonyms
its
most basic form, is only Correct pronoun usage
their
a
mere instruction on what a person should and should not be doing. Some people abide by it, some people Correct article usage
apply
does
not, and in order to keep Change the verb form
do
the
society well-behaved, we shall try to make as many people Correct article usage
apply
to
abide by said Fix the infinitive
apply
laws
as we can. In that case, I think we should teach Use synonyms
students
that are studying in elementary school about basic Use synonyms
laws
to abide Use synonyms
to
.
Change the preposition
by
Students
at these ages usually Use synonyms
listens
to whoever’s in command without many questions, meaning that they can be shaped easily. So, it makes sense to teach them about basic Change the verb form
listen
laws
right away, maybe starting from the most basic, Use synonyms
such
as not harming others, not stealing people’s valuables, and so on. Linking Words
Then
, by their nature, they will shape themselves to behave to what was taught by the teachers, resulting in a more well-behaved student, leading to a well-behaved person in our society.
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On the other hand
, it might be difficult to teach someone that may not fully focus and behave Linking Words
accordingly
right away. Linking Words
Although
Linking Words
students
in elementary schools are much easier to shape, Use synonyms
students
in secondary schools are Use synonyms
also
much more cautious of themselves. They will generally be easier to control in a classroom setting Linking Words
due to
their cautiousness, Linking Words
have
greater Unnecessary verb
apply
capability
to receive and comprehend a piece of information, etc. Replace the word
capacity
Students
at these ages will start to have their own beliefs, their own Use synonyms
personality
, and their own way of living, Fix the agreement mistake
personalities
shine
brightly. For some of them, it could be past the point of no return, Wrong verb form
shining
that
they will not change who they are and what they do no matter what.
In conclusion, one could argue that Correct word choice
and
students
in secondary school are much easier to teach Use synonyms
due to
their maturity, Linking Words
however
, they are Linking Words
also
in a period of time where they are starting to have their own thoughts. So, I wholeheartedly agree with teaching Linking Words
students
in elementary school about basic Use synonyms
laws
right away, Use synonyms
instead
of postponing it to a later point in their life.Linking Words
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