Some people prefer to listen to music while studying, as music has a calming effect on the mind. Others prefer a pin drop silence in order to concentrate on the content they are studying and have an undivided attention while they do so. Which option works better for you and why do you think the other option is not viable to ensure a successful study time?

Laws

, at

its

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most basic form, is only

a

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mere instruction on what a person should and should not be doing. Some people abide by it, some people

does

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not, and in order to keep

the

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society well-behaved, we shall try to make as many people

to

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abide by said

laws

as we can. In that case, I think we should teach

students

that are studying in elementary school about basic

laws

to abide

to

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.

Students

at these ages usually

listens

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to whoever’s in command without many questions, meaning that they can be shaped easily. So, it makes sense to teach them about basic

laws

right away, maybe starting from the most basic,

such

as not harming others, not stealing people’s valuables, and so on.

Then

, by their nature, they will shape themselves to behave to what was taught by the teachers, resulting in a more well-behaved student, leading to a well-behaved person in our society.

On the other hand

, it might be difficult to teach someone that may not fully focus and behave

accordingly

right away.

Although

students

in elementary schools are much easier to shape,

students

in secondary schools are

also

much more cautious of themselves. They will generally be easier to control in a classroom setting

due to

their cautiousness,

have

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greater

capability

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to receive and comprehend a piece of information, etc.

Students

at these ages will start to have their own beliefs, their own

personality

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, and their own way of living,

shine

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brightly. For some of them, it could be past the point of no return,

that

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they will not change who they are and what they do no matter what. In conclusion, one could argue that

students

in secondary school are much easier to teach

due to

their maturity,

however

, they are

also

in a period of time where they are starting to have their own thoughts. So, I wholeheartedly agree with teaching

students

in elementary school about basic

laws

right away,

instead

of postponing it to a later point in their life.