The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar diagram illustrates, the ratio of
people
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living in the
cities
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of the Global.
Overall
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, 6 continents
such
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as
Africa
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,
Asia
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,
Europe
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,
Latin
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America
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, North
America
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, and
Oceania
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are present.
Africa
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and
Asia
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have almost
same
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the same
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percentage
in
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from
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the
year
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1950 to 2007.
However
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,
Europe
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,
Latin
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America
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and
America
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also
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have similar growth in the population living in
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apply
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urban areas. In ,
future
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the future
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almost all
people
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will migrate to
cities
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in the coming years.
To begin
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with the
Year
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1950,
Africa
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and
Asia
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have
an almost equal proportions
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almost equal proportions
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of
people
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living in
cities
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.
That is
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15% in
Africa
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and 17% in
Asia
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.
while
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,
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apply
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Europe
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and
Latin
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America
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have double the ratio compared to
Africa
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and
Asia
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. It shows 51% and 42 % in the beginning
year
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. There is only
2
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a 2
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% difference in the growth of North
America
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and
Oceania
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. 64% in north
america
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and 62 % in
Oceania
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. In the
year
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2007,
Africa
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has the least number.
Its
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about 37% and
Asia
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and showing 41%.
furthermore
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, There is
huge
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a huge
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increase in the countries like
Europe
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,
Latin
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America
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, North
America
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and
Oceania
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, more than 50%
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people
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of people
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migrate to
cities
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.
In addition
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to
this
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. In the future years,
Africa
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and
Asia
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will cross 50 and about 62% of
Africa
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and 66%
in
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of
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Asia
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will settle in Urban areas. Rest all Contients will reach near
to
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apply
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90% in the future.
As a result
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,
Europe
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,
Latin
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America
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, North
America
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and
Oceania
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become
Over populated
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Overpopulated
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words people, cities, africa, asia, europe, latin, america, oceania, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban areas
  • population density
  • economic development
  • historical urbanization
  • trends and outliers
  • urbanization levels
  • socio-economic implications
  • environmental impact
  • urban living
  • global trend
  • development strategies
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