Mrs. Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter, •suggest how you could help her in her home. •say why you would like to do this work. •explain when you will and will not be available.

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Dear Mrs Barrett, I know that you need a person to help you in your home next summer. I will be glad if I could do

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job. I speak English very well, so I believe that we will have good communication. I can clean and organize your house

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you will out.

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, I can feed your animals if you have someone. I am very interested in

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work because I am unemployed, and I need to make some extra money.

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, I have experience in

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type of activity considering that I usually do the same job for my mother’s friend. If you want, I can give you her phone number. I am available to work for Monday to Saturday, we can talk about that for extra money if you need me on Sundays. Please do not hesitate to contact me through my email at [email protected] or my phone number 555-4574. Yours faithfully, Marilia Rodrigues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

157 words

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