You recently assigned a contract of your home painting. The work is over but you are not satisfied with quality of work. Write a letter to the contractor for the same. Write a letter Describe what you are not satisfied with Say what you want the contractor to do and your action plan Say what was good about this service

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Dear Mr Jonso My name is Tinotenda Potsekayi, I am writing

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letter to show my disappointment regarding the painting job your team recently did in Taomina Road house number 4A.

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, the

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I came home from work, I was surprised to see that my living room was painted white

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of grey. Considering

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my living room need repainting.

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Also

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I would like you to remove all of the patches on the walls and make the colour we agreed on the first

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. I hope

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will not take time, because

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the weekend I will be on a business trip so I will not be around. As we agreed that the payment will be on the following

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, I am afraid that the payment will be successfully paid the

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you finish the repainting.

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, the other rooms came out nicely as we agreed,

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was delighted with the painting. Looking forward to hearing from you at the earliest. I request you

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have

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job done

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week. Yours Faithfully, Tinotenda

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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7 paragraphs

176 words

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